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However, China still names itself as a communism country. It still has many differences and arguements with western. Economically, China has made a huge progress since it reformed. It helps china from one of the poorest country become the second biggest economy in this world. It only takes about 20 years and nowadays people had started to predict when will china overcome the super power U.S.

On the other hand, china also pays for the globalization, those negative aspect of globalization could be best to show what China has lost. First, because the globalization, China has to make deal with the world, which means the government of China(Communism party) can not do whatever they want to do. Second, the globalization let more people go to China. One day, the western media may be able to there as well which may undermine the power of goverment harshly. Third, In China, the income disparity also polarized the rich and poor to a serious scale. During 1978 to 1996, the real GDP grew on average by over 9 per cent a year. The living standard has been considerably
improved due to the economic reform launched in 1978. The policy was “letting few people get rich first” through special, preferential policies, which became the dominant reason for the widening gap of rich and poor pose in China. This undermines the stablity of China. Fourth, since China joined the world, outside of china, people pay much more attention on it, the bad human rights record, the issues of Taiwan and Tibet have been criticized by western. Inside of
China,more people have been abroad and more MNGs have opened in China, both of them will influence the stability of the government.

Answer 1

However, China still names itself as a communism country. It still has many differences and arguments with the west.

Economically, China has made a huge progress since it reformed, in the last 20 years it has become one of the biggest economies in this world from one of the poorest. Nowadays people had started to predict when china will overcome the super power to the U.S.A. The living standard has been considerably improved due to the economic reform launched in 1978.



On the other hand, china also pays for the globalization, those negative aspects of globalization could be best to show what China has lost.

1. Due to the globalization, China has to make deal with the world, which means the government of China (Communism party) cannot do whatever they want to do.

2. Globalization allows more people and western media to visit China, which may undermine the power of government harshly.

3. In China, the income disparity also polarized the rich and poor to a serious scale. During 1978 to 1996, the real GDP grew on average by over 9 per cent a year.

4. The policy was “letting few people get rich first” through special, preferential policies, which became the dominant reason for the widening gap of rich and poor in China which undermines the stability of China.

5. Since China opened its boarders, westerners pay much more attention to the poor human rights and the issues of Taiwan and Tibet have been criticized by westerners.

6. Inside of China, more people have been abroad and more MNGs have opened in China, both of them will influence the stability of the government.

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Answer 3

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Answer 4

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