can you word this letter please?

Question

I want to send a letter to our local toystore. We received excellent service while shopping there.There was a sale on and we wanted to buy 2 car seats and a light stroller for our up coming holiday. We spoke with a lady called Lorna who gave us brilliant advice. And even knocked 10% more off our purchase.
Can you word a thank you letter that explains all that and our gratitute?!!!

Answer 1

I'll try!



Dear sir or madam,



On behalf of my family, I would like to express the utmost gratitude we hold for your fine company. Recently we had gone to your store with the intent of purchasing two car seats and a light stroller. One of your employees, an immensely helpful woman named Lorna went above and beyond our expectations, redefining the words "customer service" in ways we cannot be thankful enough for. The advice she provided us with was exactly what we needed, and the manner in which she presented it to us was done in a way which truly displayed her professionalism. This wonderful woman treated us with such respect and understanding that we hold her in the same regard we would hold a friend. In closing, we look forward to doing business with you in the future and thank you once again for your unrivaled service.



Or something like that.



P.S.: I didn't include the thing about the discount because I wouldn't mention it unless you know it was okay for her to do. She seems like an awfully nice lady, so I wouldn't want to get her in trouble. But if she was allowed to do it, by all means include it!

Answer 2

Dear Manager/District Manager,



RE: CUSTOMER SERVICE



Thank-you so much for having such wonderful staff at your West Street store!



On July 15, 2009 I visited "Toy store" to purchase two car seats and a stroller. While there, Lorna (a Sales Associate) took the time to listen to our needs, answer our questions and make appropriate recommendations. Her product knowledge not only saved us time and money, but made us feel good about our purchases.



I wish all our shopping trips could be so easy.



Please pass our thanks on to Lorna and let her know that her brilliant advice was greatly appreciated.



Sincerely,



your name

Answer 3

Dear sir or madam,



When I and my family visited your toy store recently we were more than amazed with the excellent service we received whilst shopping there. As we wanted to buy a selection of items from the sale we spoke to a lady named Lorna who gave us brilliant advice. She also deducted 10% from our purchase, which i believe is more than excellent service and your staff and store deserves the up most of recognition. I hope to be returning to your store in the near future as the service and products you supply are more than excellent.



Yours sincerely,

Name

Answer 4

Thank you very much for the services extended. I congratulate you and the storekeepers for the excellent ideas of attracting customers and satisfying them with the articles put for sale.