Question:
is the following English message correct grammatically?
Technology
2013-12-24 01:28:43 UTC
Hello everybody,
I just want to make sure from the message that I am going to send to my colleague who is going to come back to work after l leave on vacation. Since English is not my first language, could you please help me by reviewing and modifying it including its title (if required)?

MESSAGE:

As the time u read this email, you will be in the office. So welcome back and hope you really enjoyed your vacation.

I am sending this email just to update you with the project progress. What I have done so far are:
1. Implemented the system blueprint
2. Finished the development for the first phase

Also, I did the first scan cycle and the report shows that don't have any problem. Attached is the scan report. Please note that I did report this to anybody else except you.

Regarding my working files, you can find everything on the development environment.

Regards,
My name
Three answers:
quatt47
2013-12-25 06:27:53 UTC
By the time you read this email, you will be back in the office, s welcome back and I hope you really enjoyed your vacation.



I now wish to update you with the project progress. To date I have:-



1. Implemented the system blueprint

2. Finished the development for the first phase



Additionally, I completed the first scan cycle and the report shows that there are no problems. Attached is the scan report for your information. Please note that I did not report this to anyone except you.



You will be able to access my working files on the development environment.



Regards,

My name
?
2013-12-24 10:25:10 UTC
It has some minor mistakes and i have corrected them ... hope dat helps !



By the time u read this email, you will be in the office. So welcome back and hope you really enjoyed your vacation.



I am sending this email just to update you with the project progress. What I have done so far are:

1. Implemented the system blueprint

2. Finished the development for the first phase



Also, I did the first scan cycle and the report shows that there are no problems.

Please Find the Attached scan report. Please note that I did not report this to anybody else except you.



Regarding my working files, you can find everything on the development environment.



Regards,

My name
Dennis S
2013-12-24 11:28:24 UTC
BY the time... So,...



2. Put a period after "phase."



Please note that I did NOT report...


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